March 12, 2023

Transfer

Rohan

Rohan felt he wasn't challenged enough at his college, and with focused transfer essays, he is transferring to New York University for Mathematics.

Challenge

Rohan came to us a few weeks before his first transfer deadline. He had selected his university based on an interest in engineering. He chose a close-knit campus because he was coming from a country far away and wanted a small community. He had exhausted upper-level mathematics courses, wanted access to more, as well as a broader range of subjects. Rohan had previously applied to transfer to these same institutions and was denied. Rohan was busy taking 20 credits/semester. Because of his tight schedule, Rohan's counselor scheduled frequent meetings with Rohan to develop an application strategy and help craft a narrative for essays-asking lots of questions to pull unique qualities and accomplishments out of Rohan. His counselor kept Rohan on schedule by sending frequent reminders of upcoming deadlines. Between meetings, his counselor quickly responded to emails to answer questions on how to complete application steps, clarify essay feedback, and to review applications prior to submission. We were able to edit his 4 personal essays and 6 supplemental essays within a day and reviewed his Michigan application on the deadline day.

How College Solutions Helped

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College Solutions helped Rohan focus his reasons for transferring and brainstormed topics with him so he had something unique to say in each essay. Both his counselor and writing coach provided comprehensive feedback on each essay draft to meet application deadlines on a tight timetable.

We helped Rohan to widen his lens and keep the big picture in mind. We helped him morph from totally stats-based essays to beautiful essays weaving in details about culture and growing up in China. They made him personable.

The Result

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We helped him emphasize how he'd personally contribute to a new college campus.

What Rohan Had to Say

What Their Counselor Had to Say

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