Will's writing skills took off during the application process and he was accepted into all his target schools by early October.
Challenge
Will's family didn't know where to start in compiling a college list that would appeal to Will's interest in an urban university considering the lack of academic strength on his 9-11 grade transcript. We compiled a college list that took into account Will's outgoing personality and his emerging leadership skills. We pulled out details about his life. In his first drafts, he had appeared one-dimensional.
How College Solutions Helped
We started by brainstorming with Will to find out more of his interests and character traits. He is personable; that trait ultimately shined through on his Common App and University of California App. His leadership skills were emerging; he had just founded a popular club at his high school. The common thread in his extracurriculars was a desire to bring people together.
Throughout the process, Will became a good writer with an amazing sense of humor. We helped him develop his main story about an interest in nutrition and weightlifting into an engaging story about independence and a desire to help others make changes in their own lives.
The Result
Will was worried about finding a school but was accepted into Penn State's main campus a few weeks after he applied. It put him and his family at ease early.
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